tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594178812950951651.post283293111719132579..comments2023-05-03T10:14:19.678+01:00Comments on Tom Boothby 3D Artist: Animation Sound TestTom Boothbyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15289297456057835358noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7594178812950951651.post-77186489191261817362014-04-30T16:09:15.563+01:002014-04-30T16:09:15.563+01:00Hey Tom,
I'm going to make a suggestion about...Hey Tom,<br /><br />I'm going to make a suggestion about your music; to me, it just seems too modern and 'fantasy' as opposed to military and brash American - I think you might need something a bit more like this:<br /><br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XWXQUhBsUVM<br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MbsuAbTTsV8<br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AtBMgAUQQS8<br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s_hP9_-DB_8<br /><br />You need more drums, more militarism, more Americanism - especially in terms of when it segues into the 'jazzy sexy lady' bit!<br /><br />I think you also need some American military chants to accompany those little sperm guys:<br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=scGeHabVQ2M<br /><br />I like the vinyl scratch etc. but the timing's off - that needs to coincide much more with the appearance of the female. I think too there's a much tighter edit between the scene of the sperms 'wolf-whistling' and the shot of the egg waving her handkerchief - I think there are a few sections where you could tighten the edit between the shots to keep things a bit pacier.<br /><br />I also think there might be an argument for desaturated your film a bit and giving it a more worn out 'film stock' feel in After Effects - for example:<br /><br />https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Oa2s9sfRg2Q<br /><br />My general point is that you need to embrace a bit further the whole 'world' of your film - which is sort of a relic of a war-film - something 'classic' and bit a dated too - just consider ways in which you can tighten up your visual concept and bring out the charm still further from what you've achieved here.tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.com