Monday, 9 December 2013

Suspiria Film Review

1 comment:

  1. Hi Tom,

    A good discussion on the use of colour throughout the film :) Just be careful and proofread your work before you submit it; you seem to have missed a name out here -

    'this can be seen in Fig. 2 below where …can be seen walking down the corridor with these bright lights'

    Also, some of your phrasing is a little convoluted, leaving the reader a bit confused; here for example,

    'this is directly from the way the sets are used to create unnerving spaces that the story seems believable within due to the unnatural spaces'

    Do you think it might be possible to take your name off the top of the page? The first one is ok, but after that, it is sort of hanging there in a bit of a distracting fashion!