Hey Tom - yep, you should be in your life-drawing classes, but I can see that you're nonetheless working hard to achieve your film... don't make a habit of being strategic about classes - just try and do everything at every opportunity and embrace the variety and experience. Be a completist! That said, your play-blast made me smile - keep going!
However, I do think you could smooth out some of the more 'acute' turns of the camera, Tom - particularly at around 17 secs, when the camera veers to the left - and then there's something not quite purposeful enough about the camera movement around 20 secs - it seems a bit 'indirect' just before it sets up the shot - anything you can do to finesse these two knottier movements?
Hey Tom - yep, you should be in your life-drawing classes, but I can see that you're nonetheless working hard to achieve your film... don't make a habit of being strategic about classes - just try and do everything at every opportunity and embrace the variety and experience. Be a completist! That said, your play-blast made me smile - keep going!
ReplyDeleteHowever, I do think you could smooth out some of the more 'acute' turns of the camera, Tom - particularly at around 17 secs, when the camera veers to the left - and then there's something not quite purposeful enough about the camera movement around 20 secs - it seems a bit 'indirect' just before it sets up the shot - anything you can do to finesse these two knottier movements?
DeleteHaha, Love it! :)
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