Another interesting read Tom; you have compared the 2 interiors well, and made some thoughtful observations.
Once again though, you are not referencing your quotes directly after; you need to have a set of brackets with the author's surname and the date immediately after the quote, so for example,
'...and so his "biomechanical" style was born.' (O'Neill, 2010)
If you do not know the date, you put s.d instead (in italics) which stands for 'date unknown'.
Other than these little niggley things, good stuff!
Another interesting read Tom; you have compared the 2 interiors well, and made some thoughtful observations.
ReplyDeleteOnce again though, you are not referencing your quotes directly after; you need to have a set of brackets with the author's surname and the date immediately after the quote, so for example,
'...and so his "biomechanical" style was born.' (O'Neill, 2010)
If you do not know the date, you put s.d instead (in italics) which stands for 'date unknown'.
Other than these little niggley things, good stuff!