This is the Third draft of my Tooth Fairy script following my tutorial yesterday:
- The Tooth Fairy rises as the
stars are shining brightly.
- Beginning the night shift of
sunset to sunrise.
- Working swiftly and safely.
- Efficiently and thoroughly.
- To ensure every tooth is
collected in one night.
- With a gift for every child.
- No tooth to large.
- No tooth to heavy.
- Nothing is too much for the
tooth fairy.
- Every tooth carefully
collected.
- Individually inspected and
some rejected.
- Before returning home to his
kingdom.
- To continue his work the
following night.
make it rhyme or get rid of the rhymes you need to have a rhythm or atleast the same amount of synonyms, just a suggestion...
ReplyDeleteThe tooth fairy rises as stars shine bright
Dusting his wings and pulling laces tight
He works swiftly and quiet like a mouse
Opening windows to enter your house....
maybe something along those lines?